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Sunday, May 11, 2008

supertingko epi 4

episode 4
tingko falls inlove

ang nakaraan

nasaktan si tingko pagkat ang crush nya may mahal na palang iba...

(fade in sa scene)

nasa room sila at ang bato ay kuntodo advice sa batang durog ang puso heheh

bato: hayy bata ka pa nga wag kasi mag madali sa pagibig ohh yan nangyari sayo
butata ang puso hay...
tingko: hu hu hu masaket!!! (gaganti ako hu hu hu) kanyang naisep..
bato: oist alam ko iniisep mo .. di ako sasali sa ganti mo ha..
tingko; wala kang magagawa isusubo kita at ako ang masusunod!!

at ayun silay nag pang buno..madaling nagapi ni tingko ang batong wala kamay walang paa hahaha
kasi tanging gamit ni bato ay dila hahaha..

pero nung isusubo na tong si bato nag pumiglas pa gamit ang dila
tinungkod sa ipen ni tingko para di sya masubo..at ayun sa inis ni tingko
sya ay huminto..

tingko: di mo ako loves hu hu hu ayaw mo ako tulungan eh waaaaaaa (iyak parang kalabaw na broken hearted)
bato: o sya sya kasi nga loves kita ayaw kong mag dalos dalos ka
gawa ako plan para loves mo mapa sayo..
tingko: talaga bato!! yehey!!

bato: pero di ka gagamit ng powers mo ha...
tingko: ganun? .. sige pwede narin heheh ano plan mo?
bato: aakitin mo si marvin mo gamit ang sweetness mo hahaha
tingko: ganun..hheheeh sweet ba ako? ahi hi

ang plan ni bato gawing kaakit akit si tingko kasi ba naman nerdy ang dating ohh
napasipag sa school sarili di na napansin, pep pa ng pep eheheh ..
si bato may natatagong galing mag make up isang skill na minana pa daw sa kanyang lola shawrding ahi hi
mag ayos ng damit expertise nya.. damit ni tingkz parang gown ahh..

at ayun pumasok na si tingkz sa school aba lingon lahat pati badaf hahaha..
effective nga ang get up ni tingkz pagkat di sya nakilala ni marvin

tingko: hello marvin
marvin: (medyo kabado) kilala mo ako?
tingko: ako si tingko di mo ako kilala? kaw naman oh halos araw araw tayo magkasama
marvin: tingko? kaw yan haha aba ganda natin ahh tagal pa js prom natin naka gown kana
or birthday mo tingko? happy birthday tingkz hehe
tingko: hehe. kaw naman ohh di ... gusto ko lang maiba suot ko today...

maganda ba marvin?

marvin: oo tingko hehe nanibago lang ako, kasi sanay ako sa tshirt mong loose at baggy pants eh.
tingko: hehe wala na yun marvin.. pwede mo ba akong samahan
marvin: dun sa bahay ni mam cheche.. submit lang ako ng project mamaya eh..
marvin: aba ok hehe sige kaw pa malakas ka saken..

si marvin nabighani sa bestfriend nyang dating nerd look at her now
wow ang sabaw hehehe...

love na ba ito? or infatuation lang hahaha..mga bata ohh hehhe

at lumipas ang mga araw masaya ang dalawa sa mga oras na magkasama
si marvin nalimutan na si ms pearl, si tingko lalo na masayang masaya...
pagkat sa wakas kasama na niya ang crush nya...



eksena sa library

tingko: marvin pag magkasama tayo ano na feel mo?
marvin: ma feel? masaya baket mo tanong tin? (note: tin na tawag ni marvin..baket kanyo? basta hahahah)

tingko: eh kasi ako rin masaya pag kasama ka ...
marvin: (sabay hawak sa kamay at bulong) masaya po ako kasi kasama ka tin...
tingko nag blush hehehe palakpak pa ng ears waaaaa...
at inihatid ni marvin si tingko sa house nila.. sabay paalam ...

sa room ni tingko..
si tingko sabay iyak hu hu hu


bato: at ano na naman yan ha tingko? nag away ba kayo ni marvin mo ha?
tingko: di po mahal nya ako eh hu hu hu
bato: eh bakit ka umiiyak ha juskeng bata ito ohh..may ginawa ba sayo?
halika resbak tayo subo mo ako dali!!

tingko: ala nga ginawa eh kaya iyak ako hu hu hu..
bato: hay naku bata ka!!! MAG SITIGIL KA NGA!!
tingko; joke lang hehehe..kasi naman eh ayaw kong mag end ang happiness namin!
bato: ganun! what do you mean ayaw mag end??/
tingko: basta i want him forever na!!
bato: hala msama yan bata nyo pa ganyan kana...ano na lang sasabihin ng ate mo? lagot ka!!
tingko: at sino mag sumbong kaw? hahaha bato ka kaya heheh ala ka magagawa...ahi hi
bato: bato nga ako pero super bato hahah lagot ka parin if malaman nya...palo ka sa pwet hahaha..

tingko: yayain ko syang magtanan!!
bato: ano tanan?!! kaw ang gurl kaw mag yaya baliw kaba?
tingko: basta basta i wont let go na!! akin sya forever ahi hi...
bato: ibato ko sarili sayo para matauhan ka!! hayy napasama pala pagtulong ko sayo
hayy nabaliw kana ...
tingko: basta basta help mo ulet ako...kunwari jontis ako para kasal kami hahaha
bato: naku nabaliw na ng tuluyan ito...

ang mga sumunod na araw ay napansin ni marvin sobrang seloza ni tin...bawat galaw
ng binata grabe react ni tin lalo nat lalapit sa gurl lagot ang marvin...

posessive na si tin di ko na sya kayang pigilin ang sabi ni marvin ....

kyat isang araw....

marvin: napapansin kong medyo palagi kang seloz sa mga bagay na di na dapat pagusapan
kyat pwede ba bigyan mo ako ng space para ma kapag isip ...

tingko: space?! anong space!! di mo ako mahal??! hu hu hu
marvin: eh nasasakal na ko eh ...

tingko ay tumakbo punta bahay hagulgul na naman sa batong umaalalay..
bato: hay naku batang ito ohh...oist mag sitigil ka ha!!
tingko: hu hu hu di na nya ako loves hu hu hu iiwan na nya ako hu hu hu..
bato: hay naku... tingko isubo mo ako at may puntahan tayo...

sinunud ni tingko ang bato sabay subo at poof change costume agad sabay lipad

supertingko: san tayo punta bato?
bato: sa planet namin..
supertingkz: at ano gagawin natin dun? mag bilang ng bato? hehe jowk..
bato: hahaha. funny... dun sa planet namin alang love...ala ring hate...
in short alang buhay...puro bato nga eh hahaha..
supertingkz: di nga ano gagawin natin dun?
bato: may papakilala ako sayo...
supertingkz: sino hitman hehehe para kay marvin ahi hi jowk..
bato: basta!!!

at naglanding na sila sa planet ek ek .. haha( ala maisep na name ng planet)
nag punta sila sa isang lugar may statue..
bato: yan papakilala ko sayo si hermi...
tingko;ano ang hermi?
bato: hayyy sige kwento ko sayo...(sos ang haba ng scene na to promise hahaha)

si hermi ay umibig sa isang taga lupa, lahat ay ginawa nya para magkapiling sila
pero alam mo di pumayag ang lahi namin makasama ang taga lupa, hiniling nyang maging tao sya upang
makasama ang taga lupa at kapalit ay pag bawi ng pagiging imortal nya..

wala naman alam sa totoong pagka tao ni hermi yung babae ...so maligaya sila namuhay pero isang araw
kidnap yung gurl ng parents ni hermi..ayaw talaga nila dun sa gurl kasi taga lupa nga eh..babaiwin
daw nila si hermi at yung gurl tigokin para ala na habol ang hermi..

at nangyari nga ang plano natigok ang gurl at si hermi labis ang pighati..
inakala ng parents nya na mag bago na isep ni hermi pag ala na ang gurl pero

sabi ni hermi

mahal ko! ayaw kong mabuhay sa mundong ito pag wala ka...(tulo ang luha sa lupa)
at dahil di sya pure na tao pebbles ang bumagsak sa lupa...

ang pebbles ay nabuo at nagsalita...

dama ko ang kalungkutan mo hermi humiling ka at aking pag bibigyan

hermi: ang hiling ko po mabuhay muli ang mahal ko...( with labis na pighati sa emotions)
sige pag bibigyan kita.. pero hermi pag nabuhay ko sya ay di na nya maalala ang mga nakaraan nyo
at di ka nya makikilala...parang sa huhay nya ay walang hermi dumating..

hermi: hindi bale basta mabuhay sya (iyak to the max)
at isa pa hermi dahil buhay ang hihilingin mo buhay din ang kapalit nito.
ibibigay mo ba ang buhay mo para sa mahal mo?
hermi; opo basta mabuhay lang sya.. kasalanan kong lahat ng ito kayat handa akong magdusa..
hinalikan ni hermi ang mahal nya sa huling pagkakataon...
at nangyari na ang hiniling ni hermi nabuhay nga ang mahal nya pero si hermi naging bato.
statue nakaluhod na position karga ang mahal nya...
since bato sya nang galing bato syang bumalik...

ang mahal nya nagising na gulat lang kasi naka higa sya sa braso ng statue.. hinanap ang parents nya ..
at dun namuhay ng normal nag pamilya at nagkaanak na...

at si hermi ibinalik sa planet ek ek .. para i remind ang mga taga rito na ang pag ibig na totoo
kahit buhay ibubuwis para sa minamahal...



si tingko naiyak na sa narinig sa batong story teller...

tingko: hu hu hu kakaiyak naman nyan...
bato: ano lesson mong natutunan ha bata!?
tingko: eh hehehe love is sacrifice po kung saan sasaya ang mahal mo ibigay even if
di kaw ang kasama nya sa kaligayahan..hayyyy
bato: pwede narin hahaha

bato: love is true if you can accept that its not for you...
kayat if magmamahal ka dapat tanggapin mo na di ka mahal ..kasi if pipilitin mo
baka kaw lang masaktan....

baka mahal mo sya kasi masarap lang feeling ...paaano pag di na msarap feeling di ayaw mo na?

tingko: oo nga ano hehehee.. sige uwi natayo may assignment pa ako cool off kami ni marvin
ok lang hehe bata pa naman kami diba bato?
bato: oo kayat wag mag madali ha!!!


hayyy

ganda ng lesson hahahah

pero naiyak ako ako dun sa statue hahaha.. paano kaya pag madami ibon dun? sino mag linis hahaha..

supertingko epi 3

scene 74
episode 3

super tingko falls in love!!!

ang nakaraan

na rescue ni supertingkz ang isang jokla na tinapon ng jowa sa tulay
pero sabay tapon sa jokla nung nadinig baket sya tinapon ng jowa haha..

(at fade in sa scene)

ang eksena nasa house na si tingko at gawa assigment andun din si bato
nuod ng marimar hahaah..
at biglang nag tanong si tingko sa bato

tingko: oist bato may tanong ako sayo.
bato: ano ba yun ha istorbo ka eh patayan na sa marimar ..
tingko: eh tungkol lang sa love hehe
bato: hahaha...love love ganyan ang tao iibig at iibig kahit pigilan mo.
tingko: ehh tanong ko lang naman paano malalamn if inlove na ang tao
bato: ako tatanungin mo eh bato ako! ano kaba? (sabay lakas ng volume sa tv) haha
tingko: hu hu hu ( sabay iyak) daya mo naman kaw lang naman matanong ko ukol dyan
hu hu hu.. sabay hagulhol ng tingko...

bato: o sya sya sige na help na kita hay batang to ohhh..tapusin ko lang tong
marimar ..record ko coffee prince hayy.. teka tapusin mo muna assignment mo ha!!
tingko: tapos na po ..heheh

bato: ano bang part ng love like mo malaman ha bata ka..
tingko: kasi yung classmate ko na papangiti ako pag nakikita ko sya ahi hi
bato: naku batang ito may crush na hahaha...
tingko : he hehe yun na ba tawag dun hhehe.. shy akew hehe..(sabay blush haha)
bato: oo tingko crush tawag dun as in parang kinikilit ang pwet mo hahaha
tingko: hahaha uu nga ano hehehe...so ano gagawin ko?
bato: wala!
tingko: wala? baket?
bato: bata mo pa ano! di pa pwede love love na yan sa crush nag simula mamaya jontis na
bawal!!!
tingko: ganun hu hu hu...kahit usap lang di pwede?
bato: hehe joke lang... explain ko nalang sayo baket umiibig ang tao..

from the point of view ng isang bato...hahaha

bato: true love hay grabeng sacrifice yan

love can be define sino ang pag bibigyan mo
parental love
love for god
blah blah hehe

basta sayo tingko love na darating sayo ay love for someone you dont even know..
at getting to know someone takes a lifetime ha..take it from me bato ako.. hehe

tingko: eh di ko maintindihan eh. ano ba talaga ang love?
bato: love ay andyan na pag naramdaman mong gagawin mong lahat mapasaya lang sya..
tingko: ganun? kahit ano?
bato: oo yan nalang pinaka simple description for you ..wag mona isipin yan
bata kapa bwal love crush pwede, take it as an insperation ha...yung crush mo hehe
tingko: eh hu hu hu.. ang labo naman ng love na yan ...

sabay may kumatok sa room ni tingko
tingko tapos na ba assignment mo? baba ka dito may dala ako sayo
tingko: ay si ate hehe
juzme: oist tingko baba na
tingko: wait po ate hehe
bato: oist dalhan mo ako dito anu man yun hahaha
tingko: oo wait lang po bato. ahi hi..

bumaba si tingko sa kitchen at andun si ate juzme hehe sexy parin hehe..
dala cassava cake. sabay kiss kay ate at takbo sa room..
tingko: sleep na tayo bato
bato: kaw matulog may pasok kapa tom nuod pa ako esp haha..habang kain ng cassava hehe

at natulog na ang batang super hero...

kinabukasan

sa library

marvin: oist tingko nagawa mo ba assignment? pacopy naman ohh
tingko: eh ( napaisip..sabi ni bato gagawin lahat para mapasaya ang mahal) sige copy ka
marvin: salamat tingko hehe yehey galing mo talaga...
tingko; kaw pa malakas ka saken hehe

in short lahat ng hilingin ni marvin kay tingko napagbibigyan...pero isang araw

nagkita sila ni marvin may dalang flowers si marvin.

tingko; wow ganda flowers mo ahhh
marving : ganda ba hehe pabigay naman kay ms pearl ohh pasabi crush kosya hehe
tingko: (nagulat nabigla at nasaktan) ahh kay ms pearl? baket ako mag bigay
kaw nalang kaya..
marvin: close naman kayo ahh sige diba best friend kita...
tingko: ha best friend? ahh ( 2nd time syang nasaktan) ahh sige bigay ko..malamyang sagot ni tingko..

at naibigay na nga ni tingko ang flowers kay ms pearl..(grabe react ni ms pearl hehe

ms pearl: talaga galing kay marvin hehe sweet naman nya baket di sya nag bigay..
tingko: na shy ata hehe lam mona naman yun torpe...( deep inside kay tingko "masaket" hu hu)


umuwing luhaan si tingko

bato: o baket ka iyak?
tingko: hu hu hu masaket hu hu hu...
bato: ano? saan ka nasugatan ha tingko?
tingko: dito hu hu hu (sabay kabog sa dibdib hehe)
bato: hehe ayan sinasabi ko eh ayaw mo makinig hahaha
tingko; tawanan ba ako.. hu hu hu
bato: isubo mo ako resback tayo hehehe

tingko: bad ka hu hu.. di ko sya kayang saktan hu hu hu
bato: aba aba inlove nga ang bruha hahaha..
tingko: ano gagawin ko para mawala saket waaaaaaaa (inyak na parang kinakatay)


bato: hayyy......

ano kaya mang yayari sa eksenang ito
mwala kaya ang saket sa puso ni tingko?
ubos na ba ang cassava sa room ni tingko?
ano kaya mangyayari sa lunes sa marimar awwwww

supertingko epi 2

scene 72

ang nakaraan

nag ka superpowers si tingko dahil sa batong pasaway at nasabak agad sa laban
ang ating hero hehehe pero ang nangyari hayyy

ekwento ko pa ba? wag na hehehe

at ang pagpaptuloy ng ating kwento...

nakalayo na si supertingko at ang bato, naka rating sila tuktuk ng isang building
at naupo si supertingko...sabay luwa ng bato...at nagbalik anyo..

tingko: grabe naman yun tumulong lang ako masama pa kinalabasan ko hayy

bato: kaw naman tingko ohh first try mo yun suko kana agad
practice lang kaw at pag nagkataon masasanay ka sa bago mong powers
dami kayang humihiling na mag ka super powers kaw oh meroon na pinanghihinaan kapa ngloob..
hayyy batang to (napabulong ang bato hahaha)

tingko:kasi naman eh bata pa ako di ko pa alam gamitin yan hu hu hu
bato: ako bahala train kita dami ko ng natulungan like
michael jordan
tingko: ano si jordan? kaya galing nya sa basketball
bato: ahh hindi sa basketbll
tingko: eh saan
bato: alam bang maliit lang bleep ni jordan heheh kayat nung napulot nya ako
pinalaki nya bleep nya hayy
tingko: ganun rated x naman yan bata pa ako!! eh baket kayo nagka hiwalay
bato: toyo kasi si jordan gusto ba naman gawin kong 2 ang bleep nya aba sabi ko
bato ako di ako si kalayan hayyy...
tingko; kaya mo naman ata yun ahh
bato: kaya ko pero di ko gagawin aba gusto ba naman yung isa ilagay sa
dila nya...para daw pagod na sa baba meroon pa sa taas hayy ayun iniwan ko sya ..
tingko: ganun!! buti iniwan mo hehe ..
bato: meroon pa isa si bill gates.
tingko: ano si billl gates grabe kala ko matalino yun ..kaw pala tumulong
bato: ahh dati na syang matalino. help ko lang sya sa wish nya..
tingko: ano wish nya
bato: wish nya sya maging jowa si brad pitt.
tingko: eh lalaki yun ahhh ano kaba bato. pinaiikot mo ata ako!
bato: oo crush ni bil gates is brad pitt matagal na ...kyat hiling maging gurl sya
kaso di ko sinunod alam mo ba gusto nyang mangyari
tingko: ano yun?
bato: dapat pareho sila ni brad pitt na babae gusto daw nyang maging tibo .. baliw ano..
ayun iniwan ko nalang sya

tingko: nakakahalata ako sayo ..ala ka namang natulungang matino eh puro palpak!
bato: owss kaw naman oh basta sa training mo kaw ang aking glory ...
tingko: sya sige na nga game!!!

at nag training na sila
push ups dito sit ups dun
buhat bahay, ikot sa moon hayy galing nila hehehe basta imagine nyo rocky in training hehehe

naka lipas isang buwan feeling ni bato ready na si supertingko
bato: ready kana supertingko feel ko ito kayat sasabak tayo sa gera laban sa masama!
tingko: ready nako? hehe sige game!!

at nagbalik na sila sa bayan at tyempo may kaguluhan
help help!! sabi nung isang lalake..help help plsss!! waaaaaaaa
nadinig ni supertingko at....
supertingko: aba aba eto na save ko sya patunayan kong super ako .. super tingko to the rescue!!!!

ang eksena
nasa tulay ang lalake at 3 fingers nalang hulog na ..kayat si supertingko sabay swoop down at rescue na sya
lumapag sila sa bridge mismo at sabi

lalake: hay salamat po sino kaman
supertingko: just call me supertingko ang bago nyong superhero!!
lalake:talaga? owwss
supertingko; sya nga pala paano ka napunta dun sa tabi ng bridge lapit kana hulog ahh
lalake: kasi po iniwan ako ng jowa ko hu hu hu
supertingko: ay wawa naman iniwan ng gf hay
lalake: di o heheh bf ko po hehe
supertingko: ganun jokla ka pala di halata hehe baket sobra naman yan magpatiwakil ka sa jowa bad yan!!
lalake: sya po nag hulog saken eh hu hu
supertingko: ganun bad sya ahh sobra naman sya
lalake: inihulog ako ng papa ko sabi ko lang naman pakasalan nya ako kasi buntis na ko hu hu hu ang bad nya ano!!

si super tingko di napigilan ang sarili sabay bato ng lalake sa sea hayyy

sabi ni tingko (baliw pala to eh kahit ako huhulog ko sya sa ilog hayyy)

heheeh hay si super tingko ready na sa fights and rescue pero di ready sa ganito
heheheh

supertingko epi 1

ang ating bida si kapusong tingko yeheyyyy



ang eksena

naglalakad si tingko sa tabing dagat ( nasa bora sila outing ng kapuso diba hehe) at may nakitang makintab sa ilalim ng puno...hmmm sabi ni tingko

tingko: ano kaya ito ganda ahhh pwede pendant hehhe ( sabay sukat)
at biglang gulat nya may nag salita ( ako ang mahiwagang bato isubo mo ako )
nagulat si tingko sabay hagis sa bato...

bato: ano kaba grasya na ako tapon mo pa!!
si tingko takang taka aba bato may boses ohh first time diba...
tingko: ehh parang may nang loloko saken ahh...sigaw siya cian kaw ba yan!! hermi thunderz oist labas dyan!!, ate cheche bad ka!! ...pero walang sumagot kundi ang bato
bato: oist mag sitigal ka!! ako nga ito ako ang nag talk ohhh!!

si tingko nababaliw.. pagkat bato kausap nya hayy grabe diba...
tingko : if kaw talaga talk sige nga say cute si tingko!
bato: akoy batong nagsasalita at di marunong mag sinungaling!!! cute ka? ok ka lang ba?
tingko: cute ako eh hu hu bad ka!!
bato: o sya sya cute ka na... basta subo mo ako dali dali at lalakas ka magka powers ka parang darna!!

tingko: owss ayaw ko nga dirty ka eh.. galing sa tabi ng ebs ng baka...(may baka ba sa tabing dagat?)

bato: tatalon ako sa dagat at lilinis ko sarili ko den subo mo na ko deal?
tingko: deal sige sige hahaha...( pag tumalon sya sa dagat akoy sabay takbo hahaha)

at tumalon na ang bato sa dagat upang maglinis ( arte naman kasi ni tingko sabi ng bato)
akmang tatakbo na si tingko ngunit pero subalit di maka alis...
may powers nga ang bato ang si tingko ay napigil..waaaaaa sabi ni tingko

tingko:grabe ka naman bato.. ala ka paatawad sumbong kita kay cian waaaaaa..

bato: oist suwerte mo na nga akoy nakita mo powers ko para talga sayo..
ayaw mo ba makatulong sa kapwa mo.. tatawagin kang super tingko gets mo!!


si tingko ay napaisip aba oo nga ano super hero ang tingko pwede ito!!!

tingko: sige na nga po ..susubo hu hu ano bang lasa mo baka lasang ipot heheheh...
bato: basta subo mo makikita mo

at sinubo na niya ang bato pero ala nangyari

tingko: ala naman nangyari eh
bato: i forgot hehe sigaw ka super tingko!! gets mo?
tingko: ahh ok heheh game!!

at sumigaw si tingko

at ayun nag bago anyo. super costume pa grabe ang ganda..

tingko: may nadidinig ako .
bato: super hearing mo yan may taong kailangan ng tulong mo!! go go go

at lumipad si super tingko hanggang dumating sa batang babae
super tingko: ano problema batang babae?
batang babae: hu hu hu pusa ko ayun sa poste ng meralco ayaw baba takot na sya ohhh...
supertingko: ala problema ako bahala

hiya ya ya! pakitang gilas

sigaw ni tingko karate ang poste ayun sabay bagsak...

batang babae: wow salamat po safe na pusa ko heheh
super tingko: ala problema hehehe
bato: sabi ko sayo eh laking tulong ko hehehe

biglang nag sigawan ang mga tao

waaaaaaaaaa kuryente waaaaaaa
nuod kami marimar wala kuryente waaaaaaaaaa
sabay kita kay super tingko ng taong bayan..dudumugin na sya
supertingko: wait let me explain waaaaa

sabay lipad ni supertingko hayyyy

practice muna super tingko hehehe...

may part 2 pa kaya ito hahaha ewannn

Saturday, May 10, 2008

pinoy pep brother thunderz edition

scene 75

ppb

pinoy pep brother

"thunderz edition" ahi hi


mga totoong pangyayari sa bahay ng mga matatanda na ala ng silbe ahi hi

mga eksena sa home for the aged...

waaaaaaaa
cast

cheche..........nurse na naglilingkod kay baet na bata ahi hi
perlas..........nurse din bestfriend ni cheche madaling mainlove wow
cian.............nutritionist ala pake sa mundo waaa
jimmie...........nurse din ang taga suway sa mga pasaway na matanda hi hi
kasuka...........friend ni hermi, thunderz
hermi............thunderz kababata ni kasuka hehe



with special participation of

rahma
promdi
century
tingko
maliititiko
apostol
jeof

special guest

under belly
jhoycris

intro......
sa room ni hermi at kasuka silay nag usap tungkol sa sa mga nakaraan
hayy buhay sabi nila

imagine nyo nlag boses thunderz na hukluban hahaha

hermi;kasuka oist tanda asan na yung eyeglasses ko, ginamit mo na naman eh
kasuka: aba aba tong ulyanin na to ohh hayan oh suot mo!
hermi: suot? eh baket malabo parin letters dito sa dyaryo?
kasuka : nasa ulo ginawa mo na namang hairban eh ala kana mang hair!
hermi: ahh hehehe oo nga ano ahi hi, sensya na Alzheimer’s haha..teka
maiba ako ..nakita mo ba yung bagong nurse hehe
kasuka; sino dun? kaw talaga ooh tanda mo na hilig mo parin!! magsitigil ka nga!
hermi: ohh kaw naman ohh nakaka tuwa kasi sya eh.. at di naman ako ganun katanda ahh
kasuka: di ganun katanda? eh ano gawa mo dito sa HFA?
hermi: ano yung HFA?
kasuka: sos di ka in, tanda ka na nga. home for the aged yun!
hermi: ahi hi oo nga pala hehe.. eh kaw ano gawa mo dito ha?
kasuka: sinamahan kaya kita..
hermi: sinamahan? eh nakita ko tinapon ka dito ng mga puliz haha nahuli ka daw sa
bar kinukulit yung dancer dun hahaha..
kasuka: di ahh (sabay kuha dyaryo kunwari basa pero ala sya salamin, baliktad pala hahaha)
napa isip si kasuka kasi nakaupo sya sa bed limot nya if matutulog na sila or kakagising lang.
kayat pasimpleng tinanong si hermi
kasuka: hermi anong oras ka gumising?
hermi: 6 am baket?
kasuka: aba buksan mo tv unang hirit na...
hermi: engots na ulyanin ka..24 hours na kaya...kaw palusot kapa inatake ka naman ng alzheimers hahaah..

samantla sa nurse station

cheche: oist jimmie help mo naman ako punta tayo dun sa room 30 palit tayo diaper dun haha
jimmie: eh haha sige pero this time kaw mag hubo ha hahaah
perlas: oist kayong dalawa ala awa ( note crush yung matandang kasuka hahaha) baet naman sila ahh
jimmie; perlas ohh joke lang hhe
cheche: ano kaya yun solid liquid baka both waaaaaaaaaa


sa room ulet nina kasuka at hermi
kasuka: oist hermi yung diaper mo asan na?
hermi: aba kasuka! di ako ganun katanda para lagyan ng diaper! haha kaw kasi eh ihi pa sa bed haha
yan maghapon ka ngayon may diaper
kasuka: ganun ako lang may diaper hayyyy tanggalin ko na to nakakahiya ahi hi
hermi: oist wag mo tanggal yan mas nakaka hiya if sa salwal ka abutin hahaha!!
kasuka: pareho lang tayo ng edad tapos ako naka diaper! hayyy
hermi: drinker ka kasi nung kabataan natin ayan napala mo hahaha...

at kumatok na ang tatlong nurse (sumama lang si perlas silay lang hahaha)
nurse che: ohh musta na po kayo..kaw lolo hermi musta pakiramdam/
hermi; kaw naman wag naman lolo, just call me hermz nalang ahehe...
jimmie: lolo kasuka musta na puno na po ba? ( nakatingin lang si perlas)
kasuka: ahh di ako na bahala wag mo na ko help kaya ko naman eh at ala pa laman hehe
jimmie: wag na po hiya lolo trabaho po namin yan..
nurse che: eh hermz yung sa inyo musta
hermi; di kaya ako naka diaper ... im still in controll sa katawan ko hehe pero thanks

perlas: lolo kasuka help kita sige na ...jimmie dali na hubo na
kasuka; wait wait rape rape ahi hi

buti nalang at liquide lang ang nasa diaper hahaha..
at napalitan na ni jimmie at perlas si kasuka...pero habang palit sila sa kabilang bed
sina hermz at nurse che ay usap...

hermz: baket ala ka pa asawa ha nurse che?
che: aba hermz paano mo naman nalaman na ala pa asawa?
hermz: eh ala ka wedding ring eh kahit engagement ala din.. ahi hi (malabo mata pero matalas pa hahaha)
nurse che; eh 6 years ago pa yun tapos na yun...devote ko nalang time ko dito sa nursing home
hermz: you mean ala ka plans to settle down?
nurse che; meroon din pero ala pa magka mali eh ahi hi
hermz: ahi hi ka dyan hehe..if ka edad kita pwede ako magkamali hehehe
nurse che: kaw hermz bolero ka malamang nung kabataan nyo dami mo gurls hahaha
hermz: di naman mabaet lang haha..
nurse che; sige po alis na kami tapos na pala sila hehe .iwan ko na vitamins nyo ha take them ha...
hermi: ok neng hehe..

at bumalik na ang 3 nurse sa station nila .. si perlas natatawa heheh

perlas sabi sa sarili ( ang cute ng ano nya ahi hi parang bulate hehe)
si jimmi naman naka halata kay nurse che

jimmie: oist che ano yung usapan ninyo dun baket ka naka ngiti ha?
che: ala yun kwento kwento lang hehe
jimmie; owwss haha
che: may ibig sabihin tawa mo ha...
jimmie: crush ka ni lolo hermi eh hi hi..
che; kaw naman wag ka ganyan..
si jimmie sabay dila ( bhe.. )

balik tayo sa room ng 2 thunderz

kasuka: oist hermi grabe para akong narape kanina hahaaha
hermi: ha! ( nag day dream pala kayat di nadinig si kasuka) ano yun?
kasuka: nabingi ka naman! kausap mo lang crush mo na eng eng kana!
hermi; hehe , ano bayun ha?
kasuka; wala! (sabay tampo, buhay tv nuod na ng 24)
hermi: balita na hehe, eto chocolate hati tayo hehe
kasuka: wow hehe .teka saan galing yan...?
hermi: secret! haha
kasuka: secret ka dyan bigay ni nurse yan ano? umamin ka! hahaha
hermi: oo na. wag ka na maingay nuod na ko kay pia hahaah...
kasuka: punta ako cr mukang may dumungaw eh hahaha...buti may harang ahi hi...

sa canteen ng home for the aged..

usap sina century, cian, promdi, rhama, apostol, small O, jeof habang nuod ng tv...


century: grabe matatapos na marimar hu hu hu
promdi: oo nga eh parang mag kameroon ako ng windrawal dyan hayyy
rhama: mas nakakaloka yung issue na break naraw sina dong at karyl! aba
apostol: ala paring nagawa ang chew haha patapos na marimar di man lang natinag ng chew hahaha
promdi; ganun break naraw? owwsss
century: di naman true yan basahin nyo sa pep, kasi naman di kayo updated haha
apostol: oist jeof tahimik ka?
jeof; teka lang my move na eh
small O: haha kamote na jeof mate kana, next serye ni marain dyesabel diba. aabangan ko yan
si fulgoso kaya gawin ding syokoy? hahaha
cian: oist mga thunderz ubusin nyo fud nyo! puro kayo tv! ( masama loob kasi di maka babad sa tv
kasi sa kusina lagi hahaha)

apostol: oist cian! di ka lang naka score sama na loob mo haha..
rhama; ingay naman ohh kinig ako sabi ni iza ...
jeof: century gusto mo makita tattoo ko? bordado din ako ha hehe
promdi: naku jeof wag na yang mga tattoo mo malamang naka wheel chair na ahi hi...
small O: jeof naman ohh tira na kanina pa yan ahhh.inugatan na yan!
century: ako din may tattoo kaso secret kung saan ahi hi!!
apostol: lam ko kung saan century!! haha

si cian pumuwesto nalang sa tabi nila nuod narin tv sa wakas. ahahay..
rhama: sarap ng pangat mo ahh cian
cian: di yan pangat. sinigang yan
promdi: kaya nga pangat, pangatlong painit mo na nitong sinigang hahaha
jeof: haha durog na karne pati gulay nag laho na ahi hi..

cian nag palusot

cian; tama sa inyo yan para madali matunaw!!

balik tayo sa nurse station...

may flowers na nasa table ni nurse cheche...
the note reads:

a smile from you takes mah aches away
so please dont go away let me be this way
always happy but wondering how will this happines stay
so keep smiling please and forever ill stay
happy coz your smilin at me..

perlas: aba at sino naman ang mag bigay nyan? may nag nanasa sayo che ahi hi
kaso puro thunderz dito hahaha...mga d o m waaaa
che; kaw naman ohh baka nag thank you lang...
perlas: ala nakasulat kanino galing?
che: ala eh...
jimmie; uyyy may admirer na thunderz hahahaha..



may lumapit na bata...si tingko ahi hi

tingko: hello po !
jimmie: ohh tingko aga mo now ahh... andun si lolo kasuka fresh pa ahi hi

tingko: eh hehe dala ko sya lanzones eh
perlas: wow baet na bata hehe
tingko: kaso nagutom ako sa byahe kaya isa nalng to hehehe
jimmie: haha ok lang yun its da tot dat counts daw haha...
perlas: ganun ala kami tingko? hehe
tingko: haha next time nalang po hehe..
cheche: musta naman school tingko .. may crush kanaba? haha
tingko: di po cool off po kami ahi hi
perlas: aba may cool off pa kaw nalalaman ahh...hehe dalaga na to...at may inabot hehe (pa secret pa)
tingko: sige po ate kuya punt na ko sa lolo ko hehe

sa room 30

tingko: lolo gising kapa ba? ( baka tigok na ahi hi)
hermi: ohh tingko nasa cr lang nag dadasal hehe
tingko; ano dasal nun?
hermi: sana di sya madalas sa cr hahaha
tingko; haha lolo hermi bad! haha

at lumabas na si kasuka sa cr

kasuka: aba apo! hehe buti dalaw ka...aga mo ahh..
tingko: aga me kasi vacation na...dala kita lanzones ohh..
kasuka; isa?
tingko; naubos eh nagutom ako kanina ahi hi at eto galing sa admirer mo daw..
kasuka; ganun haha tanda kong ito may mag regalo pa haha sino sya apo?
tingko: di daw pwede sabihin eh...shy daw sya...
hermi: hahahaaha kasuka tanda mo na kerengkeng ka pa hahaha..
kasuka: nag salita ang hindi kerengkeng hahaha...
tingko: aliz na ko lolo...punta pa ako sa mall may papabili si ate juzme..hehe
kasuka: ahh sige ingat ka ha.. apo..wag muna pa jontis lagot ka sa tatay mo haha..
hermi; oist tingko wag mag tagal sa mall.. baka naman may date ka dun haha
tingko; ala po hehehe.. bye bye

hermi: ano yan ha kasuka? chocolate ba?
kasuka; teka nakabalot eh ..
hermi: dali haha malamang memo plus yan hahaha
kasuka: ngek brief , aba baket may zipper?
hermi: haha brief may zipper hahaha para di kna hubuan pag palit diaper mo hahaha..

ano kaya ang mangyayari sa love story ni nurse cheche?

sino kaya ang admirer nya?
si perlas makuha kaya nya si lolo kasuka?

pangat din kaya ang ulam tom ?


scene 76

ppb

pinoy pep brother

thunderz edition


ang nakaraan

may regalo si lolo kasuka mula sa secret admirer...
brief na may zipper....

(fade in sa scene)


hermi: hahaaha cute naman ng gift mo parang kilala ko na kanino galing yan
kasuka: ahh ganun..balik ko ito.. aba delikado ito baka sumabit sa zipper eh..
hermi; di na sasabit yun nag retreat na diba hahaha..
kasuka: eh ano tawag dun sayo! hahaha
hermi: edi sugod!! hahaha
kasuka: hahaha you wish! ahi hi

hmmm mukang nag eenjoy ang 2 d.o.m na to ah hi hihi...punta tayo sa nurse station...


jimmie: may bago daw tayo ahhh kaso 2 weeks lang daw kasi lipad na sya us
ala lang daw mag asikaso sa kanya kayat dito daw muna..
perlas: ahh si lolo under sosyal sya ha ginawang hotel to hahaha..
cheche: oo mayaman yun ha...

at dumating na ang guest nila hatid ng anak..

jhoy: hello gud am sa inyo eto na kami ....
jimmie: ahh sige po mam help ko na kayo...
under; kaya ko namang mag lakad iho...malakas pa tuhod ko hehe..
perlas: may medical condition po ba sya mam jhoy? ala pa po yung records nya sa amen eh
jhoy: ay wala naman..dala ko yung latest records nya...
ang problem lang ay tinamaan ng golf ball sa sa pwet...kaya di pwede maupo ...
cheche: ganun wawa naman lolo under ...paano po nangyari yun?
lolo under: kasi nasa 4th hole na ko pulot ko lang ball ko sabay ayun tama sa pwet hayyy..
ala nga umamin sino eh...hayyy aniwai ok naman ako wag lang muna upo .. so sabay higa lang lagi haha..

at sinamahan si lolo sa room 30
aba may room mate sina hermi at kasuka ahi hi
ang anak ni lolo under ay umalis na rin asikaso papers punta us si lolo...

sa room 30 nuod sila eat bulaga...

cheche: hermz eto na yung sabi ko sayo na room mate nyo for 2 weeks lang..
lolo under meet kasuka and hermi,
kasuka: asan si perlas?
cheche: andun sa room nina apostol laro daw ng bahay bahayan hehe
owwwss ( sabay sabi ni kasuka seloz ata ahi hi)
hermi: nice to meet you pre..dito enjoy ka
cheche: oh iwan ko na kayo ha mag rounds pa ako...
kasuka: under san ka dati work?
under: ako dati sa govt..head ako ng pink ribbon committee ng senate..
hermi; pink ribbon?
kasuka: ano gawa ninyo dun?
under: kami taga hanap ng verde ang dugo sa govt na ayaw mag paka totoo..hi hi hi..
hermi: hay naku true ba yan ha..
kasuka: naku naman ohh haha meroon ba nun
under; meroon ..madami funds ang nawawala dahil sa mga patagong eksena ng mga
verde dugong govt employess lam nyo ba yun..kayat nabuo kami haha..
lam nyo ba si bleep ay swarding.. kaya alang mukang humarap sa senate kasi baka
mabulgar na verde dugo nun hahaha...ma bunkal ang phone records nya ..
puro i love you kay bleep hahaha..

hermi: ganun?!! hahaha
kasuka: haha ok ka under haha dami mo makwento sa amin hahaha..


at dami ngang kwento ni under .....samantala......sa room nina apostol small o at jeof

jeof: oist mga gurang di nyo pa buhay tv kanina pa eat bulaga ...baka makalampas
yung joke ko. nag send ako dun ng entry haha..baka akin na susunod na joke weeeee..

small O: kaw na mag buhay, nag pep pa ako ...may pasaway sa article ni marian eh..supalpal ko haha..
apostol: ako na mag buhay ...sana di absent si idol...
jeof: ohh joke na pala hehehe..

at nadinig ni jeof name nya...sabay sigaw pero mahina lang haha..
at ito ay ang lolo joke...

jimmy: lam nyo lolo ko grabe sa babae kindat lang nya sa babae sasama na.. grabe ano..
vic: ganun di pala lapitin ang lolo jimmy..
jimmy; kindat nga lang eh lapit na .. wala pa din? ganun
vic: basta wala yan.. yun lolo ko isang sulyap lang ha.. isang sulyap...sasama na yung gurl
lolo mo jimmy may kindat pa sa lolo ko sulyap lang!!
jimmy: grabe naman yun!!
vic: kaya wala parin lolo mo sa lolo ko hahaah..

joey: mawalang galang na ha ...pareng vic mawalang galang na si jimmy wag na haha..
yung lolo mo jimmy kindat sama na .. kaw vic sulyap lang sama na

yung lolo ko dumaan lang walang kindat walang sulyap.. sama agad yung gurl...
vic/jimmy: ganun teka grabeng galing naman lolo mo...teka saan papunta sila
joey: pauwi na kyat dinaan na si nanay ko sa school..

vic/jimmy: ngek grabe naman ohh...

si jeof tawang tawa...
si small o natulala si apostol wala lang...

small O: yun na ba joke mo jeof? grabe naman oh
apostol: hehe pwede na yun hahah..
jeof: eh ano ngayon may 3k ako hahah

small O: aba oo nga ano haha funny yung joke mo hehe pa deliver ka pizza weeee
apostol: oo jeof pizza naman dyan haha..
jeof: oo sige pag dating nung premyo hahha.. punta ba dun sa eb or dalhin dito haha..

haha balik tayo sa love story ni nurse cheche....

nurse che ay isip sino nga kaya yung nag bigay ng flowers hmmm
si hermz kaya?

jimmie: oist che..day dreaming ka dyan.. yung dextrose ni lola wiselady oh tuyot na!
che: ay naku hehe wait lang po lola wise...(di naman maka speak sila lola kasi nawala speech nya
nung nag break sila ni going through nasaktan masyado ang lola) hahaha

che; jimmi si perlas asan na tagal naman nun bumili ng mangga..
jimmie: mangga? ganun naputok pa pala baril ni lolo hermz haha
che: naku jimmie tigilan mo ako ha...(sabay dila) bhe...

balik na sila sa station at ayun meroon na namang flowers dis time may kasama buko pie...

the note reads..

i asked the stars for advice
and they told me to be nice
soon a gurl will come
and both will fall inlove
but time will shorten
the love you have everlasting
so love her with your time remaining
coz you wont be there to hug her this evening.....


na shock si cheche parang sinabing matitigok na ang admirer nya..

pero ala syang clue sino yung admirer nya...
naisip nya (sino bang malapit ng matigok tonight) ala eh...

sino kaya ang suicidal dito? pumasok sa isip nya si debraliz..
kaso sabi nya bading yun eh di yun....

kayat si hermz pinuntahan nya...sa room..

ala sila naalala nya may outing ang mga thunderz...sa mall..nuod bfgf...

si che simpleng silip silip sa books ni hermz. at may naka singet na papel

it reads..

i wished for you to be true but sadly it was all an imagination
just a part of mah mind that wished for things i cannot hold on..
so che ill leave you now coz im too old to be the man

the man who can take care of you and not the other way around..
with this letter i hope youll find . dont worry i wont die
ill just wait till time waves at me goodbye...


di malaman ang gagawin ni che...
maiiyak ba o maawa sa tandang hermz...

umaliz sya at sulat ibinalik diretso sa station emote ang nurse...

perlas: che san ka galing eto na yung mangga mo..
jimmie: oist penge buko pie ha hehe
cheche: ahh sige lang kain kayo...

madrama pala tong si lolo hermz hahaha..


at sa room ni na apostol dinala ang cash via dhl galing eb

jeof: wow bilis naman, mga thunderz may pang pizza na tayo apostol tawag kana dali!
small O: akin yung veggie ha..
apostol: ako kahit ano dial nako hahaha

dumating na ang pizzz

RENZ PIZAA ahi hi

renz: pizza po sino po si apostol?
apostol: ako yun bilis mo ahh...
renz: we deliver po within 30 mins or libre na pizza nyo...
small o: asan yung veggie pizza...
renz: ngek biggie pizza po ito ...
smallO: kaw talaga apostol oh nabingi na naman hayyy

sina rhama promdi century nakikain sa room nina apostol..
sabay tongits nag anim..

partner partner hmmm

balik sa station...

dumaan yung mga nag outing sa mall sa station

si che hinarang si hermz

che: hermz may tanong lang ako sayo...
hermz: (kinabahan) ano yun che?
che: dun tayo sa garden sa swing...
hermz: ok dalhin ko lang gamit ko sa room ko ha..ill meet you there nurse che...

at andun na si hermz sa room nila...kinausap si kasuka
hermz: kasuak mukang nahalat na ko ni nurse che. ano gagawin ko? lam ko namang di kami pwede
kasi thunderz na ko hu hu hu.. ayw ko din madinig sa kanya na di kami pwede.. masaket yun wa..
kasuka: kasi naman kaw eh .pa emote emote pa sa poems mo flowers pa hay naku...
kasuka: labas ako dyan...malay mo loves ka rin...
hermz: ganun...
kasuka: puntahan mo na dali usap lang naman eh...


at andun na si lolo hermz sa garden .si che naka upo sa swing (note dalawahan yung hehehe)

che: hermz halika usap tayo...
hermz: eh ano ba usapan natin nurse che ...
che: kasi may nag papadala saken ng flowers with notes pa...
hermz: ganun ( naku eto na) ahh sino naman yun?
che: kaw yun! huli na kita....
hermz: hehe.. huli na pala ...at anu evidence mo ha...hehe
che: nag silip silip ako sa room nyo may nakita ako note dun..nakaipet sa book mo..at handwriting mo yun ha
same ang hand writing dun s notes sa flowers...
hermz: heheh
che: ok lang naman yun saken...


at nag usap sila

nawala ang kaba ni hermz kasi feel nya ang love ni nurse che, pero di nga pwede
tanggap naman ni lolo hermz yun lam naman nya eh.. gusto lang nyang mainlove ulet kahit sa huli
feeling of being inlove masarap ..kahit di pwede...

si nurse che na intindihan naman ang feeling ni hermz so they understood each other .
hermz just wants to love again...kung baga special friend nya si nurse che..
si che...suklian si hermz pero sympre just friends....

hayyy masaket ata ito hu hu hu

pero sa point of view ng thunderz pwede na yun....

Thursday, May 8, 2008

remember

smoke drifts quietly across the room as i asked the bartender for another shot.
he poured the tequila and went back to mix more temporarily forget your worries juice
i feel dizzy now, the room feels like its shaking, getting dizzy getting ..
its been a long times since ive been in these places last time was when we first met...

a common friend introduced us, till then we never looked back
some say we were too fast, some say we were destined
we love each other thats all that mattered..
now i dont know, did we really loved . did it matter that we never fought.


its like that we just drifted apart,
no goodbyes no bitter words just one kiss
and thats all she wrote.

i try to go to these places and hope she'll be there like the first time we met
dancing on the ledge to the music of 90's not caring if somebody is watching
shes a great gal, dont get me wrong just goes out more than your average gurl nothings wrong.
shes a sweet gal no doubt 1 year of being stuck together like rice those times were so nice.

i didnt see it coming her leaving, did i hugged her enough were the kisses i gave not sweet enough
those i love yous each day i whisper while i hold her hand couldnt make her change her mind


almost i cried coz they played the tune in mah mind, the one she sings to me
before we kiss, the song she sings when she makes love to me...
"whenever i sing mah songs on the stage on mah own when ever say mah words wishing that
they would be heard"

mah heart sang with the band, i just played cool and finished mah 5th glass
used the napkin on the table to wipe the tears that fall, each word the singer belted out
each tear i wiped it out, no body in the room noticed that i whispered each word.
each line of the song i know coz each line i loved so true...

just passed 1 am and im soo tired, ive been like this since 3 weeks
3 weeks of searchin the morning she left..



its like that we just drifted apart,
no goodbyes no bitter words just one kiss
and thats all she wrote.

looks like its gonna be another sad drive, hope i make it home tonight
tom we shall see if i have life left in me, so search for her thats mah plan
ill find her, and all will be back as it is. of us being one of us just livin life
til time waves at us goodbye.


pancit canton


finally im almost home from what felt like a day on hells bosom
walkin towards sanctuary, felt the munchies as i pass by a store..
the little store where an angel keeps watch, think ill buy
pancit canton for dinner tonight

as i approach the little store mah thoughts were not of canton
but rather what to say when i face her again
coz the last time didnt go well, couldnt say anything mah
mind got lost garbled msgs all i could say, and she turned away...

how do you do, how was your day, did you think of me the whole day?
here i come ill ask now , "pabili nga po ng canton yung green 3 po"
all i could say. while she says " aba ginabi ka ahh" while she fetched
the canton from the glass cabinet, overtime eh, as if she knows
what time i should be home.

and there was magic there
her eyes didnt leave mine while she bagged what i asked for.
so slow was the scene as if time stood still...
i held out mah hand to pay for the canton mah hand touched hers
and felt that magic again, i think i saw a flash and mah heart
almost jumped out at that moment when i saw what reflected in her eyes
what the smile she had meant and that aura i felt from her..

yan lang dinner mo? she asked me.. tamad ako magluto eh . all i could muster as a reply
still our eyes never strayed away from both our stare..and i could see
she is more relaxed at ease with me, and i tensed as a string on a guitar
couldnt think of what to say next hope she doesnt think that im a pest

ohh meroon ka pa bibilhin?.. coz she noticed that ive been standing
and not sayin anything.. ha.. ahh wala na sige thank you..
mah mind now blank from being dazed with her smile that deprived mah
thoughts of a logical phrase wanted to say more but its obvious
i got lost tried to recover and not fall from grace
ill ask for her name hope its not too late

hmmm i tried to start..hmmm thats all that came out..hmmm

ano pa ba bibilhin mo ha? she asked me..hmmm isa pang canton please
kulang eh...ok wait lang ha... all she said
i slapped mah self coz i couldnt, i couldnt even ask her name
ohh well maybe ill try again tom maybe hope she still here
hope ill be able to ask her.

coz tom ill be thinkin of her ,thinkin my canton will be cooked by her someday
but till den first thing is first i have to ask her name ...



this story is about


woke up and couldnt figure it out, felt so dreary i believe
the night before was so blurry like a snow storm that burried me.
i could remember but part of it i could see we had a fight
argued bout everything and never let each other give up an inch of ground
stood up and walked towards the bath room, standing there i remember
we used to play, brushing mah teeth while you covered mah eyes with your panties.
now im alone standing facing the mirror wondering how did this happen


but i guess ill be free, free to come home late free to not come at all
free to have the remote for my own, free being alone..

took a shower that was quick, toweld mah self dry and dressed
walked passed the fridge you always complained about loose door hinged ill replace it
but still i havent done that.

full of memories the house you left i stood starin at the couch we always watched movies on
its a little old you said once before. it was a wedding gift from your aunti flor.

5 years we shared this house now i remember the date we first stepped into this house
full of promises full of laughs i never thought that it would not last.

went back to the kitchen and tried to make breakfast but i remembered
you didnt do the groceries yesterday coz i wasnt home for 3 days


but i guess ill be free, free to come home late free to not come at all
free to have the remote for my own, free being alone..

i just made mah self coffee and got ready for work
the car still fresh with your perfume, i gave you that scent to cover up a blunder i made
i forgot our date to meet at your cousins birthday last week..

full of memories still mah mind but i couldnt hold on to the love i longed
pawmized each other to love till we got older and not remember what we had for dinner..
a pawmize i tried a pawmize i lied,

but i guess ill be free, free to come home late free to not come at all
free to have the remote for my own, free being alone..


tried to start the car but before i could turn on the ignition i saw your wedding ring on the dash
i read the engraving " a pawmize to love a pawmize ill keep love with all mah heart mah soul ill gladly give"
tears started to fall after reading soul... im sorry love i was weak i couldnt keep the pawmize i made.
were ever you are love please remember me we had a love we both knew was true
i made mistakes im sorry i hurt you..

i said to mah self those words and remembered all the sweetnes she gave. i took her for granted i said
to mah self she left me coz i loved only mah self.

went back to the house coz i didnt feel i could work, layed down on the couch and cryd mah eyes out.
i miss you all i could utter all mah words meant nothing each word a blunder

i miss you dont leave me alone i tried to be strong but i couldnt hold the sharade for that long..
i miss you i was wrong i didnt held you when you were cold and alone at night i didnt tell you i love you when
you were cryin mah love i didnt listen to you when you have sometin to say

i didnt say love you enough to make you stay...



but i guess ill be free, free to come home late free to not come at all
free to have the remote for my own, free being alone..
im sorry


napapangiti tuwing na aalala mga usapan natin nun ay mahalaga
para sating dalawa bawat oras na magkasama mga oras na di na mauulit pa
naalala ko pa mga pangako ko sayo na iyong pinaniwalaan mga pangakong di na matutupad kailanman
tanda ko lahat ng mga sinabi mo "di mo ako mahal napatuyan ko may kausap ka sa banyo pero di ako"

eto ako napapa iling na lang sa mga kalokohan kong naka sakit sa minamahal
minamahal yan ba dapat ko itawag sayo? nasaktan kita paulit ulit pa.
puro kasinungalingan lang ang sukli ko sa iyong pagmamahal naibigay mo na lahat at itoy napatunayan.
kayat eto ako ngayon naalala ka subalit napapa ngewit masaket pala malawa ka pag ibig


mag sisi man ako ngayon ramdam koy huli na pagkat sa pag ibig ang buhay nya
ang pag ibig nyay patay na. sinaksak ko puso mo ng pag durusa kasinungalingan at pa asa.
nilayuan mo ako, nung una akoy na patawa, sige lang ok lang umalis ka
pero eto ako ngayon hinahanap ka, pag ibig ba nadarama ko? oh hanap lang init nya..

muli sanay bigyan ng pagkakataon papatunayan ko hindi ako gago
gago lang lalaking iiwan ka, sira ulo ang hhayaang mawala ka
pero sino ba makakadinig nitong panawagan ko, nag iisa lang ako sa kwarto
kayakap litrato mo , litrato mong nakangiti nung panahong tayo.

webcam

webcam

happy to see you smilin on cam,
coz you know i miss you since you left town,
couldnt resist to view you here, hiding behind this username
please just be yourself, singin ang smilin it feels so great, its like you
never left coz each day i can see you happy, but its not really
the same

since you went away,
all i think about was sayin your name, sayin your name all i could
do coz you left me nothin i could do, hope youll remember
me each line i post, coz its only you in mah mind its only you
each day i try to live this life.. life without you so hard to do,
just glad i can view you.

first time

feels like the first time

saw your eyes felt like i just died
coz i thought i saw an angel
standing still and talkin
feels like the first time
that i saw sunshine with mah first mornin

i tried to look again without you noticing
hazel blue eyes i can see them clearly now
reminds me of a dream i had once
to reach for a star and claim it as mine
feels like the first time
that i dreamed of love coz i saw your eyes.

should i approach this girl with big boobs
never thought angels got any use for those.
coz i know just looking at their eyes
sends joy up and down the spine
but i dont mind if shes gifted with that
feels like the first time
i discovered that i am a man.

hello new here? i asked
yes im looking for ...she continued
i can help you with that
just walk with me and youll see
feels like the first time
you feel love coz its from me

tryin to forget

tryin to forget


i have a headache, but cant remember how i got it.
stood up and almost slipped on a bottle of rum underneath
just realized the room is in disarray stale food and bottles
all over, still dizzy from last nights solo party
had too much happiness with a bottle of whiskey.

slowly walked across the room saw the bathroom and greeted it undivided attention
doin mah business mah eyes focused on mah left hand the ring finger exactly
still felt the ring that was there previously,
a slight smile i felt on mah face coz remembered kissing you was so great


started to shower to wash away last nights grime
in due time ill be where i made you a shrine
the place where we tot love will always shine
the place before full of love divine
is now just another venue for short time

pulled mah self together before leaving the house
kept thinking happy thoughts of the day
i know i wont be able to stop thinking of you while im alive
thoughts of you are always on mah mind
thought of you being here by mah side
thoughts of you im tryin to forget
thoughts of you i wanna continue.....

last love

the last love


love lost love found love i have lost i cannot find
too many complications too many questions
i cannot answer them im lost for explanations
love lost love found yet love for me cannot be found


love needed time to grow and space to show
love wanted proof of love and got lost
lost on thoughts of love i have lost
found out of love that lied, love lost
its chance to shine from this heart that died


love wont find what should have been mine
perhaps i didnt say the truth
wasnt me that lied only this heart cannot find
truth in each word it says
only the broken hearted ones
will feel what i feel each time it says
i love you to a heart that doesnt care.

love that was true but its only from me
that seeked your heart that thought it was true.
this heart of mine cannot forgive the heart that lied
coz it only loves once and then it dies.

so heart of mine ill let you go ill burry you
with all the thoughts of loving true.
heart of mine the last love you felt
im sorry i couldnt hold on
the last love you felt was the last love youll get..

malayo pa ang langit

malayo pa ang langit

naka upo at nagiisep mainit ang panahon at akoy napapikit
kaw parin nakikita ko kay tagal na ng panahong nawalay sayo
mulat ulet at balik sa ganito, buhay na malungkot malayo sayo
buntong hininga kuha ng gitara, gawan sana kita ng kanta

hanggan ngayon di ko pa matapos mga letrang noong naisulat
tungkol sa pag ibig na hangad, hangang ngayon mga letra parin
at di malapatan ng tono mga letrang di ko makanta
pagkat ala na ang makikinig sa mga letrang galing saking dibdib


malayo pa ang langit di ko ito matanaw
malayo pa ang langit ramdam ko akoy papanaw
malayo pa ang langit pagkat wala ka
nag hihintay parin sa pag dating mo sinta...


yakap ang gitara iniisip kita pagkat dati tinuran kita
sabi mo pa nuon gagawan kita ng kanta turuan mo lang ako mag gitara.
at ngayon naalala ko mg letra mo nasulat sa puso ko
"mamahalin hangang wakas yayakapin na parang wala ng bukas"

mag uumaga na di parin ako makatulog, galing sa gabing puno ng lungkot
ilang linggo ng di ka nakikita palala ng palala ramdam koy akoy mawawala na
isang araw pa ramdam koy katapusan na pero malayo parin ang langit sa puso ko sinta

malayo pa ang langit di ko ito matanaw
malayo pa ang langit ramdam ko akoy papanaw
malayo pa ang langit pagkat wala ka
nag hihintay parin sa pag dating mo sinta...

aasa pa bang ikaw ay babalik, wala man lang senyales sa iyong pag ibig
aasa parin ako sa pagbalik pagkat gusto ko marating ang langit.
langit sa iyo nanduroon, sayo ako paparoon
langit koy ikaw lamang langit na gusto kong maging akin muli...
magpakailanman

sorry

im sorry i made you cry
hope this wont be goodbye
tried to make things right
but love wont let me hug you tight
i wont tell lies
just dont say goodnight
if ever youll read these lines
im sorry i made you cry

sorry

im sorry i made you cry
hope this wont be goodbye
tried to make things right
but love wont let me hug you tight
i wont tell lies
just dont say goodnight
if your reading these lines
im sorry i made you cry

tried to undo all that made you cry
but the tears that fell i couldnt find them now
tried to mend the pieces of your broken heart
tried to glue them back together good as new
but i couldnt make them fit im sorry ithat it hurt..

im sorry i made you cry due to all lies
im sorry you had to cry ill try to bring back your smile
im sorry you met me just person who loves you dearly
im sorry it hurts so bad i dont really know love its so sad....

come

come let me touch you .
let you know how much i need you,
let me wispher words only mah heart will say,
i love you hope that youll hear....
need you soo i wont let go come on now let me hear it from you ,
sweet words i love you too

i wont rush you to say those words
ill just be waiting till you feel that am not absurd.
a smile from you is all i require
for each day i wait for the answer
so if ever youll find it that i am lovable
you wont be sorry coz im so adorable..

please take a chance you wont regret it not even once
if any of mah rhymes makes it to your heart
hope yoll let it stay there and dont let it depart
love from you i wanna have let mah heart say
all that needs to be said
i love you i want you some of the lines inside
this heart would like you to be beside .

trycycle

trycycle


araw araw antay ko pag labas mo sa bahay nyo
at araw araw din kinakanta handog ko sayong kanta
pagkat lam ko daraan ka sa harap ng bahay namin
kayat buong lakas koy bigkas mga letrang kay lalim

eto na sya kayat kanta nako pero ni minsan di ka lumingon
tuloy lang lakad mo papunta trabaho. sana nga nadinig mo
ang kantang araw araw inaawit sanay nga ay nadirinig
kantang inaalay sa babaeng minamahal araw araw

hatid tingin nalang ulet sa iyong pag sakay
ala na ko magagawa kundi mag hintay
dito lang ako sa bahay pagkat di pa makahakbang
upuan kong di gulong di pwede lumabas kay malas.


bukas kaya mapansin na nya ako at ang kantang ginawa ko
sana man lang lumingon sya isep ko tuloy sya ay suplada.
pero sa tingin ko mabaet sya. palagi naka ngiti mata nakatawa.
sana nga mapansin na nya mga letrang kinakanta sa twinang parating sya.


kantahin ko parin sa araw araw na sya ay daraan
at mag hintay sa gabing sya ay darating
sana hita ko ay gumaling na pagkat gusto ko ng sa bahay nya
akoy ay kumanta para malaman nya itong
kanta kay tagal ng ginawa para sa kanya.

i love you

i love you

just dropped by to say hi would you mind it if i
said i love you without telling you why
should i explain this feeling im getting
always thinking should i even get it goin

i love you said it again hope you heared it
or else il say it again i love you dear hope its clear
should i say it again, hope youll say
i love you too, in mah dreams i heard you
say i love you come let me hug you

then wake up feelin blue coz i know the dream
i had was you and couldnt come true.
i love you one last time coz i cant get you out of mah mind
i love you let me say its only you that makes mah heart this way..

takot ako

natakot ako

parating kana excited na ko
pero natakot ako paano
kung makita mo ako umayaw ka
kahit friends lang iiwas kana

di ko ata macarry yun
ang sweet mo sa sa bawat letra
sweet ka kaya sa personal?
ang baet mo sa bawat reply
baka masunget ka dyos ko day.

kayat eto tago nalang ako
indian kita sa usapang tagpuan
nagalit ka nabasa ko at ngayon
di ka dalaw sa tambayan
nasaktan ka ba kasi di ako dumating

natakot lang ako pagkat
malakas lang loob ko
kasi nakatago ako sa username na to
sa totoo torpe ako
pag andyan na blanko na utak ko
baka ma bore ka lang kasama ako


at pag iniwan mo na ko
wawa naman kahit friends
akoy iiwan waaaaaaaaaaaa

duster

duster


wala na sya matagal na
subalit parating hanap sya
mga alaala naiwan nya
yakap ko panyo nya

wala na sya lumisan na
hanap ko parin ang amoy nya
tanda ko pa una naming usapan
feb 17 2008 parang kailan lang
tanda ko pa ang kulitan


wala na sya asan kaya
tinatanong bawat tala
kausap ang litrato nya
saan kaba nag punta


wala na sya pakiramdam ko
mag isang pagtanda kaharap ko
piliting umibig sa iba sabi nila
wala na sya di na magmamahal ng iba


wala na sya nag iisa ako
nababaliw na duster nya sinuot ko
pakiramdam ko matutuluyan na
wala na sya di ko matanggap
wala na sya di man lang ako nakapag tapat.

i miss you

i miss you

been cryin since i decided
to forget the love i desired
not too long ago a dream came true
but i couldnt go on mah mind said no


since then mah heart stopped beating
mah mind kept on pretending
you didnt arrive you are not here
just a figment of mah delusional mind
thats all there is

but still mah heart can feel
it knows your near
just a post from you
can give life back into

oh love look at me
been cryin since love cannot be
this heart wants you
but mah mind doesnt let it come true


please let me be with you
atleast hear me
with this last post
ill say
i miss you

espada

espada



linggo ngayon gala lang sa mall, plano bumili ng shorts at guitar strings napasobra emote last night
naputol.

di sinadya may nakabangga habang hawak polka dots na short pants, sorry po sensya na at napatingin sya
maganda sya, napansin ko mata nya parang nag susumamo, di sya nagalit bagkus ngumiti . ok lang di naman ako nasakatan
bigkas mula sa labi nyang napansin kong kay gandang tingnan.

pinulot ko dala nyang pinamili , nabuksan sa pagbasak ang soen na 6 pack nyang panty, dali kong ibinalik sa kahon
at sabay abot sa bininbi. at nun ko napagmasdan completong mukha at katawan, naka blue dress sya v neckline ruffles pa
maamong mukha at katawang gusto kong pakasalan.





parang sinabi ng heaven "oist pagkakataon mo na kayat tira na ng tira". pero sabay sabi sige ha sorry sa abala
antay kasi ako ng bf ko at baka mainis pag late ako.


ahhh.. eh pwede makuha number mo baka kasi may naiwana ka hahanapin ko dito, nagmamadali ka eh.
sige sabi nya eto 09174765039 sabay takbo nya pagkat intay sya sabi nga ng bf nya.

bago sya umalis akoy kinilig pagkat kita ko eyes nya saken ay naka titig.

dalian kong sinulat number nya. 09174763905? ay 09174765039? naku limot ko pa ata ...
ala na ko magagawa naka labas na sya ng mall. hu hu kawawa

dahan dahan akong lumabas ng department store. iniisep number na sinabi kahit name nya di ko nakuha paano ko kaya
sya makikilala..tanda ko amoy nya kay bango naman..at mga mata parang nagsasabi mahalin koy ikaw lamang...


umuwi nako sa bahay at sabay txt sa kanya.."hi ako yung naka bangga mo sa mall at pinulot box of soen mo".
try ko mga number na sa tingin koy tama

# 09174765139 reply "hoy di ako nag panty! gusto ko presko!!
# 09174765239 reply " aba at sino ka!! bigyan mo ako load papaligahin kita lalake man babae akoy pwede!
# 09174765399 reply " sorry wrong send ka. dibidiban kita sa likod at ma tigil ka!!"

hay naku hirap naman nito isa pa sana sya na at pag hindi parin akoy maloloko na..

# 09174765039 reply " owss talaga sige nga ano suot ko kanina?

wow at parang sya na nga describe ko agad ang suot nya parang ako ang bumili sa pagkakasabi

naka blue dress ka po na may ruffles v neckline ...

ahh ok kaw nga...so may naiwan ba ako? di ko parin na check nabili ko eh. teka ano nga pala name mo?
txt tayo di kita kilala kahit name man lang magsabi ka.

ako po si elrey manuel pag utusan mo lang wag lang utangan ahehe. joke
ahh hello elrey...ako naman si samantha.

elrey: so asan na po bf mo? di ba dapat mag kasama kayo?
samantha: ahh di sya nakaintay iniwan ako ayun uwi ako mag isa ..

kwento ni samantha buhay buhay buti naka bottomless txt ang load ni elrey, kita tayo gusto mo elrey? tanong ni samantha
ha.napa nganga si elrey pagkat kay bilis naman .sige saan tayo meet? at kailan? ...ahhmm gusto mo dinner tayo later reply ni
samantha kay bilis nga diba... parang interesting ka kasi eh elrey i wanna know you more..
pagkakataon na ni elrey isang magandang babae ang etot yaya sya mag dinner agad sila..
sige saan tayo magkita? sunduin ba kita?

mag meet nalang tayo..dun tayo sa mall ulet mainit eh para malamig naman mall tayo ha meet mo ako sa may toy kingdom
sa megamall ha. txt mo ako if andun kana..

sige po samantha darating ako ....




espada 2nd part ito..


andun na sila nagkita naka red blouse si samantha jeans ang sexy hayyy...usap sila habang ikot sa mall yaya si elrey kain tayo baka gutom kana.
sige sabi ni samantha kaw na bahala saan tayo ..

sweet ang dating ni samantha parang matagal na sila magkakilala di nag reklamo kahit saglit palang nagkasama
hiwakan na ni elrey kamay nya...hawak kamay hanggang makarating sa kfc ...upo ka muna wait mo ako ha..sandwich ba or rice na?
samantha salad lang po baka tumaba ako ahehe.. owwss seksi mong yan tataba agad matagal pa yun .. pero sige salad.

nakapila si elrey pero pinag mamasdan si samantha kay ganda nya . pumayag na sumama, siguro gusto lang magpalipas ng oras
tabunan ang sama ng loob sa bf. at bigla nyang naiisep baka makita kami lagot ako, makita ng bf nya pagmamahal ko

umupo na si elrey harap ni samantha.. dapat dito ka sa tabi ko elrey ayaw mo ba ako katabi, naligo naman ako ahh.
lumipat si elrey at may kunting ngiti lambing naman ni samantha sana akin na sya..

usap sila sa buhay buhay ano work mo elrey sabi nya sabay hawak sa hita ng binata na parang bang mag syota
ah adminitrator po . taga salo ng pasaway ahehe..ahhh galing mo naman .. so saluhin mo ako elrey pasaway ako eh
hehe oo di lang saluhin pamper pa kita kasi pasaway ka...


kaw ano gawa mo samantha...hulaan ko.. artista ka..ganda mo eh siguro kapuso star ka na introduce sa lunes ha.
haha galing mong mang bola elrey. malamang may gf kana kasi if ako niligawan mo malamng gf mo agad ako..

hehe ala po gf eh ala magkamali ..owwss elrey yang gwapo mong yan ala gf hmmm wawa naman.. ano ba type mong gurl elrey?
ahh eh tall maputi mapangusap ang eyes very kissable ang lipz at naka red blouse and jeans..
hay naku elrey ako yun eh.. ano ibig mong sabihin ha ako type mo? baket kilala mo na ba ako ha...
how can you love a person na now mo palang nakita.?
eh kaw tanungin ko po.. y ka sama sa isang taong kanina mo lang nakita?

well sabi ni samantha..feel ko lang mabaet ka wala lang gusto ko lang maka usap ka. parang tagal na tayo magkakilala eh
di ka ba isep na masama ako tao at mamaya kidnap kita benta kita per piraso?
hahah grabe ka naman ohh pinakaba mo ako.. well ganun talaga ang buhay ...
dont worry samantha baet ako...pero baket nga pala ako pa. pwede naman friends mo diba?

well friends ko ayun kabatak lahat ng bf ko eh so if sila yayain ko malalaman ng bf ko..
eh katakot naman nyan baka makita tayo ng bf mo or friends mo sumbong ka lagot ka...

di wag ka matakot friendly date lang naman to diba...at sila ay nag outing sa bora.. di na ko sumama
iniwan ba naman ako hayy...


hayyy.... hinawakan ni elrey hand ni samantha di pumalag ang dalaga nagkatitigan sila at ayun na kiss sila...
di naman mabilis di naman saglit.. tamang tamang kiss sa dalawang taong gusto ang kiss..


wala ng pakialam si elrey if maging kabet sya basta gusto nya itong dalaga..
baket mo ako kiss elrey.. ahh eh nakiss kita eh .. gusto ko po kiss kita sorry po nadala lang ako ng damdamin ko
parang iba naramdaman ko elrey nung kiss mo ako...parang di ko pa naramdaman to..isa pa nga dyan hehe..

kiss ulet sila pero this time mas matagal na...pasimple silang kiss sa may likod ala masyado tao kasi lapit na magsara ang mall

alis na tayo samantha mag sara na sila...saan tayo punta ha.. hmm saan mo gusto .. bar tayo..

yah i like that sige bar tayo!! sakay car at diretso zirko timog. andun si jose and wally allan k at eb babes.

enjoy sila at holding hands parin kay sweet naman parang sila ang dapat magmahalan..

dami ng nainom nila tipsy na si samantha si elrey naman nag yaya na.. tayo na hatid na kita
samantha.. di ako pwede sa bahay lam nila nasa bora ako lagot ako pag nakita lasing ako..
san kita dalhin ha? kahit saan wag lang sa bahay...baet ka naman diba sige na alis na tayo..

dun tayo sa tahimik palipas ka ng tama...sleep kalang bantayan kita..samantha..
sige higa na nga ako eh.. at tunog ang cell ni samantha.. ang bf nya na nganga musta
oh ano sasabhin mo? sasabihin ko lang nag papahinga ako at tuloy lang ligaya nya dun enjoy din ako dito.
halika tabihan mo ako massage mo naman forehead ko nasobrahan ata sa tequila ...
sumunod naman si elrey at dahan dahan nyang hinimas ..

baba pa elrey..dito ba? .. baba pa el..sabi ni samantha ..dito po ba? malapit na po el siga pa...

halikan mo ulit ako el kailangan kita...di na nag tanong si el kung bakit kailangan sya basta randam nya
labi ni samantha kay lamot kay tamis pag ibig na ba ito ka swerte naman ohh..akin sya ngayong gabi sabi nya sa
sarili...

off muna lights el dali... mahiga ka ako bahala pabayaan mo akong bigyan ka ng ligaya...

madilim ang paligid si el naka higa ..naka ngiti sa dilim intay ang langit upang makatikim..
ramdam nya naupo sa kanya si samantha..pero both hands hawak nya buong higpit .nag mahalan sila...

first time pala ni el kayat di na pigilan ...si samantha sanay na kayat sya ay napatawa...
bilis mo naman el.. dibale its ok...

binuhay ni el ang lights at nagulat ...ang katawan ni samantha pang binibing pilipinas. ngunit napa tingin sya doon pang mr philippines ang kanyang turon!!
muntik na himatayin kawawang elrey na virgin..

waaaaaaaaaa.. lalake ka samantha waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

sigaw ni elrey...

samantha baket baket baket..
owwss kaw naman enjoy ka naman ahhh...maganda ako wag ka mag kaila .. nabighani ka kayat kaw ay sumama...

pero saan yung waaaaaaaaaaa lam ko na hu hu hu...wag mona sabihin lam ko na ...
dont worry el mag papa opera pa ako pa putol ko na to.. ganap na babe na ko next month wait mo!!

ayaw ko na naloko mo ako hu hu hu.. first time ko nabulilyaso waaaaaaaa...
mah first suspense novel (part1)

ala pa title

as i reached out she looked at me probably thought i was nobody
and yet i reached out to her ..hold out your hand i asked her nicely

and she met me halfway a minute more and she would have been lost
along with her car on that bridge..as i was helping her limp along to mah car
we heard her car crash down the river bank. it was a frightful sound..she gasped

still in shock she looked at mah eyes i can sense she is glad to be alive...
i held her hand once more to let her feel she not alone...

the ambulance came and with a few checks they declared she is safe..they carried her and
long drive to the hospital was the first thing on mah mind...

the police asked a few questions just the usual standard procedures..i answered them all
just drove by and saw her car on the edge ready to take the dive all feared.

nobody else was driving that day i for one was goin home early ...

the police checked the the road they could see skid marks on the opposite way of the road..
looks like a vehicle swerved and she tried to evade.then she drove almost off the bridge..

please leave a number of us to contact you if ever we need more info..
i gave mah 2 phone numbers to extend my help and went on mah way home coz mah mom is alone.

driving along as night fell .. i felt something behind mah shoulder looked at the rearview to check
what it is, to mah surprise its a little hamster..i slowed down to stop at the bend, and held the
little rat to inspect.. how did you get inhere.? and remembered the gurl hmm probably got a ride
on her and jumped in mah car while i sat her down ....ill find her tom and bring little hamster
i think she missis this little hamster...


part 2

at the hospital yes shes still there, the doctors wanted to observe her.
just scratches all i could see and a bump on the head. what could it be that the doctors
need observe her..

i talked to the resident and she tells me, we saw something in her blood..and we need to verify
what it is..

is it Contagious? am i at risk? no no she said she has some blood disorder these things are hereditary
ok ...listen i came by to give her this hamster i thought its her pet she left on her car..

ok you can leave it with me. and with that and a quick look at the patient
she looks peaceful sleeping... yes shes been sleepin since she arrived yesterday.
...

the doctor set down the caged hamster on the table near her bed..
suddenly the gurl screams ...waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa no no no !!! stay away!! please !!!

she was hysterical almost fell off the bed..but managed to stand up and go the corner
where she looked like a child that saw a ghost..covering her eyes with her arms her knees trembling
cowering at that corner i thought shes gonna be eaten by someting big..

but its only a small hamster what could have been that thing that terrified her to death
and somehow she felt that it was near she was sleepin earlier without any commotions.

nurses ran towards the room and helped the gurl on her feet. but she still screamed
one nurse injected something and slowly she fell limp...

please leave the resident doctor said to me.. looks like we have more than physical promblems on our hands

yes i can see there was something else that happened before she almost drove off the bridge.

i said... ill take the hamster back and come back may be tom doc!!

the doctor didnt hear what ive said pre occupied with the gurl on the bed..

i wasnt able to ask the name of the gurl, is she single any family members arrived yet.
questions left un answered maybe tom ill know.. but for now she is asleep again
the hamster ill bring home again...


driving home i noticed the hamster is staring at me,, are you hungry little hamster .whats your name?
just starin at me this little hamster.. i think ill call you tingko ...for a friend i miss ..
are you hungry tingko? ill fix you dinner lots of cat fud i hope you like those..
or maybe not.. lets stop by the grocery and ill buy you hamster snacks...

still the hamster didnt budge just starin at me with those little black eyes..

sudenly something flew across the car windshield i couldnt make out what it was but it was big..
i stopped to check .. but i didnt see anything...i was a little scared of what has happened..
went back in the car and the hamster was gone... the cage was still locked but no hamster..

i checked the car and dumbfounded not able to find the little hamster..how in the world can that happen?
i asked mah self...

just drove off again towards home.. i think this heat is getting to me..



part 3

i was closing the garage door when i noticed that the cage is missing too.
this is really getting really annoying. this could only mean 2 things
1 some1 is playin me like a violin
2 im loosing mah mind...

looks like i dont have to visit that gurl at the hospital tom.. no hamster no reason to go..
but somethin in me wanted to go something about her made me think of goin back to her..
i didnt even get her name... at least know her name and after that i think thats that...

i was preparing dinner when the phone rang...

hello is this mr. manuel.the voice sounded like that from star trek a vulcan talkin bout boarding the enterprize
yes this is manuel... what can i do for the police this evening...

well after investigating the crash ..we found that the stearing mechanism, well has been welded and to steer left.
and something else... there were lots of animal hair in the car.. what ever it was it sure was big enough
the hair strands were so long...we are still tryin to determine what kind of animal it was.

we called you to ask if you saw any animal near the vacinity of the incident.

wow.. got me there.. your telling me it was not an accident but a murder attempt?
and they used an animal to kill? and who welded the steering? and how in the world did they weld while
the car is in motion?

well we are still at lost on that one.. but you havent seen an animal around that area the time you
rescued the gurl?

no sorry officer didnt notice any animal you described.. i should seen one if its really that big...

well ok mr manuel sorry to be a bother...thx for the time..

with that call.. i lost mah appetite ... a murder attempt and im involved ( well i did rescue her)

switched on the tv and the news is on.... "just in, 3 died in the country general hospital tonight "
hey i shouted.. thats the hospital i was in this afternoon...
"details will be available later on the flash report 24"

what could have happened there...?

puzzled i just sat back and tried to sleep .. mah mom went to her sister for a week of vacation..
im alone now.. and thinking of these mysterious events "im involved" i whispered.. shouldnt have rescured her.

what else could happen... with that thought i fell asleep on the couch and the tv is still on..

suddenly i woke up and stood .. heard a crashing sound at the garage.....



part 4


i turned off the tv and slowly walked towards the window and tried to see whats wrong at the garage..
i couldnt see much the light there were off..walked towards the backdoor kitchen and also brought along
a clever...again a crashing sound.. sounded like the tools cabinet toppled over..man i thought to mah self
first time for everything... slowly i approached the garage window and peeked inside..

didnt see anything at first ... then a snarling beast jumped infront of me paws up high , it was behind the garage window
the glass shattered and i tumbled back wards.. i dropped the clever and backed off fast..
the beast is caught in the screen of the window with broken glass all over i ran as fast as i can towards the house.

locked the doors and got mah self another knife... called the police while at the corner of the kitchen..and wiated.

no other sound were audible just the mah heavy breathing.. and i think after an eternity the police came

they knocked the front and i shouted " im here im here!!" i ran towards the front door...

thank Him you came!!

the police cool as ever asked what the problem was..tuckered out i couldnt talk stright
i was sayin it was big it was big!!!

calm down mr manuel.. what was it..

still shocked and terrified of what has happened i couldnt think straight ...

the police checked the house and the garage one police came back and said

there was a break in at the garage.. it was mayhem there the cabinets were all over turned one
window broken from the inside..looks like something wanted to come out fast..

mr manuel calm down and tell me what you saw...

well i started,, it looked like a wolf but it was huge.!! as big as a full grown bear!!

another police walked in and talked to the head officer

sir we found animal hair in the garage..looks like its the same with the gurls case..

mr manuel did you visit the gurl in the hospital?
yes i did this afteroon..

well shes one of the dead after a big animal was seen rampaging in the hospital
the other two were nurses..

too bad i remember watching it in news early evening...

never thought shes one of them...

well the animal seems to know who to kill coz the gurl was in isolation
but this animal just came from nowhere and killed her. along with the duty nurses at that time..

one officer gathered evidence ...looks like what ever it was is long gone now..
but i didnt see any blood on the shards of glass or the screen..

but that animal jumped thru the window and broke the glass and punched a hole inthe screen..
and your telling me there was no blood there..

mr. manuel we shall handle this.. mean while lock your doors and go to sleep

go to sleep? after this episode i dont think i can...
can you atleast leave a police car in front ...

sorry mr manuel were short handed tonight due to the hospital incident...
you can call us if there is a problem... just lock your doors...

and they left and im alone.. i locked the doors and windows and ran up the stairs to mah room...
and locked that too..


tried to sleep in the dark... and heard a chipping sound.. and searched the room ...

to mah surprise i saw the hamster in the dark corner .. it looks scared..i tried to call it

come here little tingko come... the hamster only looked at me with those little black eyes.. as if it knows
whats gonna happen... the look of terror i felt in its stare ...

it was too late behind me was the animal how it got inside was not my concern right now
im thinking of how to escape it..the little hamster just stood in the corner watching us...
with little black eyes as if directing the beast on what to do...

i couldnt move an inch, the beast from what i can see with the flash light pointing down .. is as big as cow.
and as hairy as lion .its whole body covered in hair...

it just looks at me and a frightful grin it approached me , the flashlight which i still held
i was afraid to point it towards the beast...with one quick motion i directed the light to the eyes of the beast
and was momentarily blinded... i fumbled on the door knob to get it open... and i felt the breath of the beast
on mah neck...i froze again and couldnt move...

with its big snout dripping of saliva i felt death was near and ready to take me...


part 5

i turned mah head enough to see the features of the beast

big bloody red eyes furry face big fangs blood still fresh on its tongue, as it slobbers on me like
dinner after 3 years of fasting,,its head is bigger than mine, ears that looked like rat ears..
the fur is all black, it stood over me like a judge ready to pass judgement on the accused
in a flash i saw mah whole life pass by as if sayin goodbye ..i feared the worst and waited for the
pain ...and thought "make it quick please i dont wanna suffer"

i was waiting for death it didnt come... and i suddenly woke up

its morning now.. sweat soaked mah cloths from the nightmare i had..mah knees felt so weak
i couldnt stand.. sat on the bed and remember the dream ... i couldnt believe it was just a dream

slowly i struggled towards the bathroom and wash mah face to clear mah thoughts of last nights dredd.
looked at the mirror and saw mah self .. wooha that was close tot i was gonna die last night..
i smiled a little and thought well that was interesting.. looks like i got scared too much last night
and dreamed of what could have happened..


went downstairs to fix breakfast... but to my amazement and surprize... the kitchen was in dis array
that was strange i didnt hear anything while i was asleep.. the whole living room was also destroyed.

and hair was all over the sofa..


better call the cops ...as i was dialing for the police i noticed something moving in the shadows
near the washing machine....

the shadow moved to the light .. it was the hamster i named tingko..

hey your here.. how did yu end up here??

the hamsters lookes like its happy to see me. it approached slowy but the look on its eyes
tells me its happy... are you hungry tingko? here ill make you breakfast too..

i put tingko on the counter top of the kitchen and i started to make breakfast..
the hamster didnt move around just sat there as if it knows that fud is being prepared for it.
and where have you been all this time.. little tingko? i asked it.. but didnt answer back
just an inquisitive look tingko gave....

looks like your really hungry little tingko...here you are...
and the hamster ate on the bowl almost fell in .then the bowl toppled over it.
haha laughing as i saw tingko under the bowl still eating...muching away.


almost forgot to call the police... dialed the number to report what has happened
last night...


i cant connect the line is buzy ..3 times i tried the last one still a buzy tone..

looks like we have to pay a visit to the police department.. a quick shower

and off they go...

in the car with little tingko in tow..

while driving in the area.. i notice that there ara alot of clutter in the streets the houses looks like
theyve been ramsacked the belongings outside the house.. one house has a big hole on the side..

i continued on to the station... then i thought been a 20 minute drive i havent seen a single person around

parked the car and entered the police station... no cops around... no activity inside..

hmmm what the hell!! hello i shouted inside... nobody inside the station.. nothing was turned on
no radio noise.. no incoming calls from cops outside..

i went outside and noticeds the area that was supposed to be filled with people is a desserted neighborhood

i cant hear a sigle person speaking... not even a noisy radio staion ...


i entered the station again to check for anybody... entered the prison section..

i saw prisoners but not in thier cells.. blood all over the floor of the basement...
and a headless man hanging on one of the bars..

this is too much. better get out.. looks like a prison break ...

i ran towards the car and drove off...

what is happening here...i thought to mah self... driving around town. i still havent seen any other
man or child or dog..


little tingko is looking at me.. starin.. i felt that fear .. like last nights nightmare..

whats going on here... ..

bago ko tapusin yung novel (pa emote muna aheheh)

bago ko tapusin yung novel (pa emote muna aheheh)


let me hold you please dont ask why,
coz i feel that im alive each time i see you smile.

could you please just let me be near,
coz you know how much happiness that love can bring my dear.

give me a second of your touch,
and ill feel them throughout my life..

each minute of us being together
is like an eternity of happiness that goes over and over..

so please let me be,
the one youve been searching for
all these years...
part 6

i dialed mah moms cell , i cant get a signal out here thats strange i should have a full bar of signal.

and thought hope mah mom is ok...

still drivin around i passed by the grocery , stopped and surveyed the scene...
i still cant see any other people around...went inside the store.. i saw splatterd blood on the floor
but no body or injured person.. fud all over cans a whole shelf has been toppled over..

but nobody here...

hello anybody here?!! i shouted still no response..

went outside and continued to drive no other cars no trucks not even a bike...

i decide to drive out of town ...driving for 10 minutes i arrive at the bridge ..

shocked to see the bridge is out.. steel and concrete gone just like that...
how in the world did this happen? earthquake? i didnt feel a thing last night or this morning.
terrorist? nah ...

i drove back thinking what could have happened... no people that i could see the bridge is out
no cellphones .. i can see cars still parked but the town is a mess.. it looked like a war just passed thru here
and i was the only one who didnt knew...

did they all leave? what made them leave? .

nearing town i started to tremble coz in mah thoughts ,im the only person here..
and little tingko is not starin at me now.. just looking out the window while sitting quitely on the dashboard..

i better try the police department again.. i know they have a radio..

parked the car and took little tingko with me... walked to the station

shouted again.. anybody here!!!! come on now!! people!! ..

i felt afraid coz i remembered the headless body at the basement ...

i went down to check ... but to mah surprise the body is not there anymore...

i shouted ...come on now!!! i know your here!! what did you do with the body !!

nobody answered the only trace of the dead body was the blood still on the floor..
so i know i wasnt seeing things... i ran back up .. to the radio room..

tried to work the radio ..cant get it to power on.... just realized the whole town
doesnt have power....

maybe they have handheld radios..

i managed to find 3 radios..and took them back to the car...
little tingko just quitely monitored all that i did.. as if it knows what im doin..

tried one radio and i i got was static... i just reliazed due to the mountains around the town i wont get any
response... looks like nobody is around ... i let the radio on just incase somebody would try to
call..

the other two i set to different freqz ..

but nothing .... i drove back to mah house and think things thru...

mah plan... get out of town...

get a hiking gear..and survival gear.. with fud med kit ...mah plan is to get out tom at fist light..

ill rest now.. lock the doors and windows in the basement ill sleep tonight...


part 7


i couldnt really sleep ...the stillness and quite that surrounds me felt like mah ears are gonna explode.

no birds no wind...the stillness is like stalking me...

i thought of the flashlight ..but then i got scared of the thought it might be out there waiting for a sign of life
somewhere... i didnt wanna give any signs that i am here... that one is left alive...
so i just looked at darkness while sitting at the corner...little tingko is in her cage

sleepin i think...its only 9 pm .. its gonna be a long night for me...

then i heard something ....thumping thumping...it started to get louder and louder feels like its
getting closer... i cant see anything in here.. the little windows of the basement i nailed shut
with boards ...but light started to invade the room.. so bright this light ...little tingko
woke up to the sound and lights ... and saw her eyes once more.. the terror in them i felt again.

something big is coming... something terrible ....thumpin thumping the sound came... thumpin thumping
the sound that terrified me went and came...felt like it flew over the house ..

i wanted to check outside but fear kept me inside, in the basement i stayed ... trembling on what just happened

i waited for 4 hours if whatever happened will happen again... still nothing ...
scraped enough courage left in me and walked up the stairs to see...

still dark outside no movement ..nothings alive out there..only the moonlight reveal the houses and cars
and thought.... nobody is left but me ...is there an invasion or something..
is there a war on? is this town quarratined or something...

little tingko fell asleep again ..i think i can hear her snoring..

its 5 am now.. i couldnt sleep the whole night... ill just wait for the sun to come up..

that was 2 hours ago...


i drove mah car as far as the road leads. to the mountain i started to walk...
little tingko is on mah shoulder... holding on with every stride i made..

lack of sleep and the thought of something might be stalkin me ...

was on mah mind but i need to leave town and find out whats goin on... the next town

is over the moutain.. 20 miles i think ..maybe ill go first to the factory maybe there are people there
its closer 5 miles only.. but i thought i have to circle after climbing the mountain..

better re think mah strategy... i thought

up the mountain or across the river...

i have to find a route across the river but its shorter.. first i have to rappel down that cliff
and then cross the river and then up the opposite cliff .. hmmmm

its only 7 stories high.. i think i can do that...

but if i go the long way.. the mountains.. i might get lost it might take me days just to clim up and down ...

should go back and get a compass.. ..no time for that...

better drive back and get lots of rope.. looks like ill spider man today..

at the local supermarket ... i looked around inspected the whole buidling.. but same thing
no one there...

took the ropes . they were on sale... left money on the counter.. just to show i didnt steal

who will care i thought... your the only person in town.. and it crossed mah mind...

better get a gun...so i went to the section for guns...
saw a shotgun some pistols lots of bullets...
i took one shotgun one barreta and a 38 special...

nobody is around to see me smile... coz its mah first time to just take what i wanted..
free free i can do whatever i wanted..

but being alone got me thinking.... its really sad not be able to see someone else...

i got a bag full of extra fud... went back to the car and drove off to the bridge..


part 8


there were about 900 people in this town and im the only one left..

while driving,,, thoughts of being killed or eaten alive filled mah mind .. i looked at the shotgun
and found some comfort in it... what ever it was ... i think this gun will make think twice

little tingko is quite at the backseat....nibbling on hamster fud i took from the store..


then i saw it...thumpin thumpin thumpin..... just over the horizon ....

it was shiny white..sunlight reflected off its skin.. the sunlight bounced off it and caught mah eye

i felt that i was dreaming... i dont see any engines on it.. no proppelers , just one cylindrical shaped
object floating in the sky... it got near the car..

its as big as a jumbo jet with no wings..thumpin thumpin.... all i could hear...

then the engine died on me, the thing got closer and i felt heat on mah body....

the gun the gun i thought but i couldnt move...

mah mind wanted to run away but mah body just sat there in the car..

the giant object is now directly above the car...

little tingko is now infront .. on the dash again... and i can see her eyes frozen in terror..
something about that look gave me chills up mah spine ....

i think this is real right now... im not dreaming ....i looked at the shotgun again...
this heat i feel .. a sudden flash and everything si soo bright... i can see everything is white.

no more colors just white .... but the eyes of little tingko is still black and still very much afraid

i felt mah self floating floating... i saw little tingko floating as well...

the car evaporated around me... the shotgun melted, i remembered i have the barreta in mah jacket..

i tried to check but mah arms cant move... stil floating i can feel...but i cant see anything else
but white ....little tingko is spinning around and i dont know now which is up or down...

now i noticed mah clothes are gone...im naked and floating.. in white space...

mah eyes started to go out of focus tried to look at tingko but blurry images all i can see

now everything is so blurry.... but still i feel im floating...

floating.... help help help!!! i tried to utter but i didnt hear mah self scream....

no sound came out not even a hush....

part 9

i woke up in the dark... man i was just a dream... the power is still out.. thats why its dark
then felt something.... i dont have any clothes on...check mah self if am still complete
yep jr is still there...

where am i? i said to mah self...tried to stand up but i cant.. i felt strapped on the bed..
i can move mah arms but mah legs are strapped down.. i cant move mah head ... i tried to reach
but then mah arms have limited movements... i can only reach up to mah chest and down to mah recreational tool.

feels like mah elbows and up are also strapped ...

where am i!! i tried to shout... but i realized somethin is in mah mouth...

feels like tube of somesort...

realizing i cant move ... panic starts to rule mah mind... imagined what would happen
and who are those responsible for this...
then remembered floating in white space...and the fear i had ...from that cylindrical object...

thought of escaping... and wondered is this the same thing that happened to the others ...
im still naked i thought... and wondered why i cant see...
is it dark or did they take mah eyes away?

i wanted to check if i still had eyes.. but i cant reach them with mah arms

so i just blinked several times... i think i still have eyes i thought..
i can feel the eyesballs still in there...


convinced mah self its just a dream all these things are just in mah mind...
ill wake up later and sweat will again soak mah clothes ....



suddenly light come on.. and everything was blue..i can see i rejoyced in mah thought...

then moved mah eyes left and right...hey there are other people here..

the others are also strapped down ... on what looked shelves on a wall..
the people alot of them ... arranged like canned goods on a grocery shelf..
i can see with limited angle rows and rows of people strapped down and the beds are on the walls..

i tried again to shout but this tube in ma mouth felt like its connected to mah stomach..

i cant get it out....


suddenly the bed moved like a roller coaster it carried me somewhere..
i can only see side ways and up i can see the ceiling it was weird looking.
looks like mushrooms up there i thought..still moving i feared the worst
what are they gonna do to me..

the bed went thru a tunnel.. with flashing lights inside i closed mah eyes coz the flashing
was to bright...den the bed stopped moving.. i opened mah eyes....
and closed them again... too afraid to know whats out there..

i hear voices but i dont understand..

like high pitched screaming with each sound i hear...

i dont wanna open mah eyes i shouted inside me afraid to look at my destiny..

i felt cold metal on mah skin.. i and heard something frightening ..

hissing sound near mah head..open your eyes i shouted in me...

open your eyes!!....

i opened mah eyes and saw...

a terrifying scene...

3 figures standing .. i was trying to figure out where the head is...

i can only see arms ...maybe the light is obscuring mah view...

the light is too bright i closed mah eyes again...

felt something poke me near mah ear...

i cant feel pain... i feel poking and the hissing sound turned into a low tone drilling sound.

i dont wanna open mah eyes... i feel that im dreaming...the lights too bright please turn it down.

please turn it down...


the 3 figures are busy removing something in manuels head...

they wore blue clothes like astronouts wear under their spaceuits..
but the heads are in their chest... they have 4 arms are long and holds 4 fingers each
taking in high pitched voices the 3 figures finished the operation...

they remove the part where the human brain stores memory...

manuel is still awake but cant remember how he got here..
and who he is... looked around and not a clue whats goin on...

ahsldfoadnlgasdofahga the first one said.. meaning this one is done go and get the rest..

he cant speak no thoughts no memory of anything ...just a basic instinct to live..

and tried to escape... but one of the 3 figures injected something and manuel couldnt move
but still breathing... the bed moved, and back it went ...

manuel is just starin at the bed above his own...

he cant tell the others of the coming tragedy...

he doesnt remember he doesnt know..

no memory ..that is all...


part 10

and the rest of the world doesnt know... the first part of an invasion is now a go..

their experiments to enslave humans and to colonize...

they have taken the whole town in one night .. the first experiment they did

make a slave out of animals native to earth..they made alot of them

and let loose one beast..they thought a distraction for the humans in town so that they can
kidnap one human at a time...

the beast are little hamsters so no one will suspect ...just a remote control
on the hamsters brains and turns them into monsters..

one hamster failed to do its job the hamster that the gurl owns...

good thing we monitored that one said the 2nd figure....it was the first one of them to be converted .
and its here now... lets find out what went wrong with that one...

a whole fleet of ships are hiding behind the moon ...all of them anxious to have a new home..

the human race doesnt have a clue...

the impending doom that hides behind the romantic moon..


they know the weakness of humans cute little things they wont think of aliens...


the human race didnt know what happened

by night aliens collected them and stored them ...

nobody saw it coming the end of human civilization..


by one week the human collecting was complete... the alien ships were full.

but not all were stored...those that have ginetic flaws were immediatetly disposed
those that had deases were not taken... killed instantly when the white beam hit them..

manuel still stared at the bed above him... couldnt figure out how he got here..
but deep inside him... grows.. i should get out i should get out

like the primal humans before him... instinct tells him to escape .....


will man kind survive?

meroon bang sequal?